What sort of kinks/niches do you want to see in Zoe
I am looking to take things a bit further, exaggeration wise. For instance the first arc (which a new page has just posted on the reboot page for you patrons out there) is about Zoe’s defloweration (don’t think that is a word…) I’ve made sure to show her hymen, it being broken, X-ray looks at the penetration, and quite a bit more blood than is realistic. The page I am currently working on will take it a step further and show basically a anatomical view of her and Damien’s big dick pushing her organs out of the way.
I dabbled in a lot of niches in the current version but the incest and anal ones where the only 2 I really think I fully explored. I am looking at what other fetishes I can expand on in the new version.
My hope is going a bit further with things will make it stand out from the pack and hopefully pull in more readers. So what sort of things should I try to work in that didn’t get explored the last time around, or what was there but you wish there was a bigger emphasis on? Also if you guys want to help me out, please try to share the comic if you ever find a situation that warrants a bit of plugging 😀 With project wonderful gone I don’t really know how to go about growing the site all that much. So if you guys read other comics that the audiences might be up for what this comic offers, help me out and post a link to my site. With myself focusing fully on drawing and not having an income coming in I need to really start growing my comic, which is extremely hard to do.
throatfuck, throatgagging, sleep assault, uncounscious fuck
The first 2 will definitely be there, the last 2 probably not. It is very much within her character to want to get every last bit of dick in there even if she can’t handle it.
I’m not sure. Bondage, cheating, Bukkake.
Thinking of things that work within the realm of your setting is harder than I thought.
not having Zoe bukkaked is a bit fail of the comic. Definitely plan to rectify that with the reboot. Bondage might have her doing some play alone in her room and accidentally lose the key to her cuffs and have to explain to her mom why she is butt naked and handcuffed to her bed or something. As for cheating, I still like the original one of Zoe and Audrey cheating on their boyfriends together, might do that as a bonus comic if can work it in
I’ve always wanted to see pegging, I think Zoe would be into it though not with Damien.
I’d also like to see her really experiment with more sex toys (more than just a dildo).
My final niche would be probably anything with wax.
Pegging isn’t gunna happen, nothing against it but I have a hard time motivating myself to draw male characters, let alone focusing on them in that way. Though I’m sure it would be something Zoe would be totally into, I myself have no desire to draw Yaoi type stuff and struggle to even go as far as drawing futa stuff (even though I know futa and furry would grow my comic as those are the 2 biggest niches, they just aren’t my cup of tea).
As far as experiment with toys, what do you have in mind? makeshift things laying around or specific things like a blowup Antonio bandanas doll like Cartman had back in the day
As far as wax I could see Zoe getting banned from a was museum for getting a bit too friendly with a Dracula figure…)
It sounds like the direction you’re going is a new spin on the surrealist bent of this incarnation of Zoe. The unrealistic things like the organs getting pushed and the virginal blood being heavier feel like they’re distortions Zoe, herself might experience.
I bring this up because while niches will grab attention for you, providing something truly unique is what will get people to spend money, and your comic’s hallmark so far is this subtle sense of “unreliable narrator.”
You could continue this subtly, such as having proportions differ based on her perception of them (having cum or cock make her tummy bulge, for instance) or having the clothes they wear be an exaggeration of their personalities (a character with newfound confidence stepping into the room in fetish gear or a piece of her clothing always being a bit torn after she loses her virginity, for example) or you could take it further to extremes like having characters fucking in public where people are only reacting to them like they’re making out (because she’s exaggerating the risk and rush of kissing in public) or even have her exhibit some vampire powers where she hasn’t really done anything she couldn’t without them (flying up the stairs when in reality she just ran).
You could also toy with this by contrasting hard reality with fantasy by switching up color tinting or shading technique. The analogue to this that really got me when I first read the comic was the scene where Zoe asks a boy to stop and he doesn’t and her vampire teeth fall out. The symbolism is tangible in her loss of her innocence and ability to cope in that moment. Anything like that (if used sparingly) would make your entire story far more memorable.
Then, if you really wanted to play with this motif, you could present other character’s biases in artistic ways. When Zoe’s mom is the center of the story, have all the kids seem younger, then when she starts seeing them as sexual entities and not just children, have them more developed than before. Introduce a lesbian character who, when she’s the center of the scene, all the other girls are center frame and a bit hotter, and the boys are still there but off to the side or even cut off by the edge of the panel. You could also play with a character’s height or a feature like their nose this way, where a character who likes them sees them as taller and with a normal nose, but one who doesn’t or is jealous of them sees them as shorter and with a bigger nose.
P.S. as for the pegging thing, it does sound like Zoe. Remember, you could always use a cut-away or fade-to-black to drop the joke and then jump to the guy talking about it after the fact. Or just cut away entirely and don’t have it referenced for a good number of pages, then have a character casually call back to whether they went through with it or not. These sorts of things build continuity and make a reader feel rewarded for sticking with a comic over time.
wouldn’t really go as far as consider it surrealist. I just have a world with a few different rules than our rules. For instance it is a world without STDs so Zoe’s only worry with getting an unprotected docking is pregnancy. Also it everyone is a bit more open sexually and things like incest and public nudity, while not the norm, aren’t huge felonies…
Bestiality
don’t see that one happening, sorry. closest I could see is her maybe having a tentacle monster fantasy scene while masturbating.
> don’t see that one happening, sorry.
ooooooh 🙁
> closest I could see is her maybe having a tentacle monster fantasy scene while masturbating.
yay! 🙂
Water sports. You did a panel of that when she was with that teacher
Yeah, if I do more it would be in a few years when I get back to that point in the story, but yeah I’d probably have more buildup to it instead of it just being a throwaway panel
Loli and shota, I think you did some of that in the Abi flashback.
I may do a flashback. I just am hesitant because I don’t want that to be what the comic is about. If I feel the story needs to address it I may do it again but with it being such a legal greyzone I don’t want to find myself in hot water over it.
A three way with Audrey, Zoe and Damien.
A lack of Audrey is a big negative on this version of the comic. I want to work her in more as a character in the next version. probably won’t have her and Zoe hook up (at least until she is pregnant) because I prefer the version of her first time being with her mom instead of with Audrey. Either way I will be trying to include Audrey a bit more in the story.
Definitely would like to see some pregnant sex. Though not sure if that’s possible beyond the current arc. Would be nice to see Zoe with a Black girl too.
I’ll will probably do a little arc thing of Zoe and Damien having sex while pregnant after I finish the story just for fun.
Size compare, you did a good job of explaining in the comments but would like to see it more in the comic. Maybe a bit of netorare things like caleb asking if he feels bigger etc… but no matter what I know your comic will be the bomb!
I’d agree with the bukkake; thought that might happen when she and Mom double-teamed the missionaries. It would be a matter of finding the right donors and how Damien might feel about her getting splashed by others.
Since Cherry_Poople would like to see her diddle with something other than a regular dildo, Dann wants bondage, and you mentioned a possible tentacle masturbation fantasy you could tie them all together.
Have her lose her dildo and search for a replacement (could do a whole week on sampling alternatives). One of the things she tries is a cucumber and as she sees the green knobbly thing sliding in and out of her she imagines it’s a tentacle and fantasizes from there about being hog-tied and savaged. Three birds killed with one stone!
yeah that is a pretty good idea. Abi could find her passed out surrounded by the contents of her crisper, “what, I needed one for every hole…” Mom sees a half eaten carrot and looks at Zoe “What, I got hungry…
Big Breasts, Breast Envy, ENF, Wardrobe Malfunction, accidental sex. Basically everything from the Kali subplot in this version
Do More Watersports, and this time, deal with it correctly (As someone who has tasted both, let me clarify something, piss tastes better than cum. Pee tastes like water, sometimes with a small touch of salt. Cum tastes very sour, and while it can be bittersweet at times, most of the times it goes from plain sour, to metallic to rancid). Maybe have her drink’s damien’s at some point and enjoy it (or if shes going to keep the vampire theme up, she could act as if it was “holy water” even tho its totally fine)
But anyways. There was something you said that got my attention, about people in this world being more open to sex, incest and nudity. And in my opinion, you should play that up. It can be as subtle or as blatant as the situation requires. Like, you could have a brother and sister at school, everyone knows they’re a couple and nobody bats an eye. Also, this is a definitive one, have other people have wardrobe malfunctions or be exhibitionists, dont have Zoe being the only one, that makes her weird, if you have more characters doing it, people will understad that this is kinda more normal in this world and well, it would be cool to have more characters like doing things like that.
Also, if its not too much to ask, thow damien a bone. Everyone seems to have somethig special here, more experience, a way bigger dick, everyone here has something over Damien, so give him something extra, like, he cums tons or something like that, it would be fun.
Anyways have a good one.
Um Damien has the biggest dick in the comic. 9.5in with Tommy coming in just under 9, Caleb only about 7 the councilor about 7.5 then the rest more average.
but probably going to ramp up the cum all around in the reboot
This may sound weird to you, but it never really felt like he was the biggest. Like, it doesn’t look any bigger than most other guys. when hes limp it doesn’t look any longer than a normal one. It doesn’t look any heavier when its erect (really big dicks cat stay upwards for too long, there is a lot of blood in there, that makes them heavy, so even if they’re rock hard, they aren’t entirely up), also girls don’t react differently to being penetrated with it, Like big dicks are an acquired taste. They’re not the standard for the majority of women, so showing any of that, or specifying that the girls that are with him at any point are size queens would do wonders for him.
Anywas… any word on the more casual world or the watersports?
The stuff between Zoe and him isn’t on the site anymore, but she said something along the lines of him and manifest destiny, as well as complained about it hurting.
Rose also mentioned something about it hitting her cervix.
But for the most part Zoe and Abi both have access to very large toys and Abi grew up with Tommy who isn’t that much smaller.