Zoe 16-5
So changed up the page halfway through. Originally the bottom was going to be Damien and Rose fucking and her 2 brothers were spying on them. Still will do that on the next page but changed where I was going with it by adding in a younger sister as well. Her name is Kali, there was too much text so kinda lost the part where her name is established as well as the part where Rose assumes she’s gay. I am not 100% on which of 2 ideas I will follow with her but she may replace her sister’s original version. Years ago, back when the comic was much more wholesome, Zoe was going to get some competition for Damien’s affections from school by Rose. Rose was going to take on the persona of a Van Helsing character because she was theatric and wanted to “defeat” Zoe. Might do that a bit with Kali but have another idea I can’t really go into without spoiling some things I’ve had planned for over a year.
Hell, it sounds like Kali may get along well with Zoe.
The sucking everyone was a joke/threat to get out of summer school, not something she’s actually done. It was a bit more obvious originally but had to purge a lot of text because I had to make it so small to fit it all down there that I was barely legible. Originally Rose was going to say “ignore her Damien, She’s never looked at a boy twice. She’s a future female fucker.” That was just my rough sketched version I doubt that’s how it would of went exactly as I was toying around with different alliteration versions of it. But basically the jist was she has shown zero actual interest in boys and everyone assumes she is gay even though she hasn’t come out.
But back to her and Zoe, I picture them forming a big sister little sister bond down the line. With Kali sort of trying to poach Damien off her, and Zoe being the sexual being she is just finds it humorous instead of taking it seriously.
I have a few paths I might take it down and not sure which yet, also not pinned down her age and that will close some doors. I first thought I’d have her be 18 like Zoe and Damien and basically be the character Rose was originally intended but I might have her be younger 16, or even 14 if I go a different route.
TINY SPOILERS
already spoiled that the creepy guy will return at some point. If I choose to have Kali younger I may have him set his sights on her and Zoe has to basically go public with the type of guy he is to protect her from him, because she sets out to emulate Zoe. So If I go that route her moves on Damien won’t lead anywhere and instead she will be more of a little sister throughout the entirety of the comic. The other option I’ve thought of is having her be a junior and 17 so that down he line (say asking Damien to deflower on her 18th or something) there could be some stuff between her Damien and Zoe.
Again I want to say I have not set anything in stone, the character hasn’t been developed or how she fits into the overall story yet, I am still mulling it over and looking at where best she would fit in with the overall story I am working towards.
Panties vanished in panel 3?
lol yeah, I didn’t notice. I’ll try to find time tomorrow to fix it