Zoe 6-21
This is the end of the arc, as well as the end of the first ch or book or whatever. The next main chunk of story is going to be building up to Zoe and Caleb hooking up. Going to be dropping down to just Tuesday posts for a while at least. I am really trying to put everything I have in this new comic and have a lot of developments on it.
I will be showing some early pages here on Friday in lieu of a Zoe page (probably the first 3 pages). These pages will at least partially be redrawn eventually with better backgrounds…
I am hiring a 3D artist to take my concept art for backgrounds and turn them into 3D assets I can then rotate and place. I am not sure whether I will trace them or if they work as is maybe even use the 3d, have to wait and see if that is something that won’t look out of place. I am hiring an artist and paying them 500$ to make up a bunch of interiors and exteriors that I then can manipulate a camera on to get perfect backgrounds that hopefully will rival the pros.
I will be doing a Kickstarter to hopefully cover the cost of hiring him, I plan to have it go live on Friday with the post here. I am not abandoning Zoe, but I hope to turn this new comic into my primary focus going forward, each day I flesh out a little bit more of the world and characters and am really liking it, and I think you guys will too. Those that are VIP members be sure to go check out the pinup of one of the characters I did up for the Kickstarter, I plan to do 3 pinups of each girl (total of 9) as a reward for those that back the Kickstarter and will probably have commissions buyable through it as well for higher tiers.
My eventual goals with this comic is to reach a much bigger audience and get it printed because I really want something that I can hold in my hand and say I MADE THIS. How I hope to reach the bigger audience is by toning down the taboo stuff (no incest in this one) and have small anime noses instead of Zoe style big ol’ ones. I also plan on having a very different humor to it (no puns, unless part of the story).
Quick elevator pitch for it…
3 cousins, Ada, Alex, and Milli are excited because their eccentric wealthy grampa has paid the cost for them to go to college on a far off space colony. When they get there they learn that it is out in the bumfuck nowhere of outer space, with interference leaving them with little in the way of modern amenities. Even worse, they have no money, and no food. Luckily for them they just moved in next door to 3 guys trying to start up a nudie mag and are looking for models.
Starving the girls agree to be their model with the promise of “hundreds of dollars”…
The story will follow the girls and guy’s struggles to get the magazine up off the ground, named Shippon girls. The girls, all virgins, will have to cope with the fact that eventually every person in this small hick space colony will know every mole on their bodies in detail. They will also deal with everyday struggles like school and love lives.
It is planned to be black and white, but depending on how the kickstarter goes and how the 3d assets come out I may be able to do it in color and still have it be a 2 a week comic. Time will tell.
Didn’t realize this was a two-person game. Hopefully things will close back as she recuperates; women often aren’t as tight after childbirth and that thing wasn’t too much smaller.. And those serrated edges don’t help …
Cthulhu accept your “Virgin” offering.
Daww
3d backgrounds are a good idea, though I’ve seen so many people learn to do it themselves, I wonder if you even need to spend that cash. I guess you can invest either money or time, it’s all the same in the end.
Aiming for broad appeal in another project is definitely a careful calculation, but… I feel like, if anything, you could use way MORE puns.
I wish I could do 3D. I actually started out after college trying to be a 3D artist for games and movies, spent 2 years in college but when I got through the core math etc type classes and started using a computer I just couldn’t keep up and got really stressed, and eventually dropped out, years later I went to film school and graduated that (though have never used that knowledge).
I don’t have the time to master a second vocation, I still haven’t mastered drawing and struggle everyday to try to get on a level that I see so many others easily reach.
As far as broad appeal, I mean in comparison to Zoe. Things like incest are great for those that love it, but is sort of a brick wall to most people. That goes for puns too, some people LOVE them (I do) but those that hate it, often won’t give the comic a chance because of them.
I really like the premise and the characters. Ada is sort of like a spaced out version of Audrey, Alex is a bit like Zoe but her obsession is more sports and competing, and Milli is more the sweet innocent girl who wants love and will read romance novels in the tub and swoon.
I am pretty sure the public viewed version won’t be pornographic, but still the story is about posing nude and sex, so there won’t be any shortage of nudity. Think of it like one of those fanservice animes, they won’t show the genitals but they will take any opportunity they get to show boobs butts etc. I think what I’d do is have it be like how Cinemax used to tone down pornos and post them to where you just didn’t see the penetration, then have the VIP section that shows those things for people that want to see that stuff.
That sounds pretty good. And that’s a pretty acceptable price on the paywall.
HOW can a woman have something THAT big in them? Especially when not an “expert” at insertion? Me? Average is painful…
Curious, What draws a girl to read my comics? If it is okay to ask.