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This is the end of the arc. Starting next week will be an arc of Zoe and her mom traveling to Tommy’s. I was a little unhappy with the outcome of this arc. Some important things I wanted to get across in exposition I failed to do such as Damien taking an interest in filmmaking, so with this next arc I am trying something different. I’ve written the arc, minus any spur of the moment jokes, out. I am really happy with the 5 pages I have written and think they will be some of the best yet. If it works out I will try to do it like this more often so that the story can move a bit more smoothly.