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Audrey pg3

on December 14, 2018 at 5:43 am

Still waiting on word of Dreams…

So since there seems to be some confusion on this arc I thought I’d clarify. I thought it was pretty straight forward and was really looking forward to doing the first page of this arc for about a year before doing it, and maybe it was because I had it in my head for so long that the meaning was obvious to me…

In the first page she is not turning him away, on the contrary she basically is saying she’ll fuck him, but no cumming inside, hence it ending saying “No, you gotta pull out”.

It seems that some people didn’t connect those dots and again maybe it was just obvious to me because I had been sitting on this exchange for a year waiting for a good time that I could bring back Audrey and introduce Eli into this version of the comic.

Here is an old page of Ugh!! (Audrey’s original comic series) that I did way back in something like 2013 after ending Zoe (the original Zoe was very different from this Zoe and it eventually came back with a pregnant Zoe after about 4 or 5 months). But, like now, back then I didn’t know exactly what to do with Zoe so I created this comic as a alternative so that readers had something to check out each week. It was more mature than Zoe with frequent nudity but was still far from porn.

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Zoe Reborn

on December 2, 2018 at 4:26 pm
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When Dreams comes out one of the things I am hoping to be able to do is reboot Zoe in 3D. I am not 100% that this will be possible because nothing shown of dreams has shown realistic human characters so am not sure if making a character that looks better than a rag doll is even a possibility, but if it is and if I have the skills to do so I want to reboot Zoe in 3d. I would love to be able to do it on the quality of something like the many Overwatch sfm porn animations, but again this is all just wishful thinking at this point.

 < something like this ideally

BUT…

If I am able to do what I am hoping with Dreams what would you guys like a rebooted Zoe to be? I have a few vocal readers that comment but for the most part 99% of you are completely silent and I just have to guess on whether you like or dislike a story or character development.

There are some big questions that I’d love feedback on like should a reboot continue with the Incest or leave it out (incest was never in any of the previous versions of the comic)

One thing I know I’ll do if I reboot the comic is I’ll redo all the purged stories that took place before what is page 1 on this site (all the stuff with Zoe and Damien and her pregnancy scare) I felt the art was pretty weak on those pages and felt that I didn’t best get across Zoe’s views on sex which caused a lot of headaches with angry readers that didn’t like that Zoe still considered herself a virgin, so would like to try to portray that a bit more clearly on my next go at the story.

That is a big part of why I’d like to reboot the comic, a lot of the story has been lost and I feel like Zoe and Damien’s history hasn’t been well established on what is currently available to justify Zoe’s attempts at dating him. about 10 arcs of them being a bit more than friends but not dating are missing and without them it feels like Zoe is obsessing over getting back together with him without much reason. That is solely on me as a writer but I look at Dreams as a way to fix a lot of things with this comic.

So what are some things you’d like fixed? Things that you’d like focused more on? Different path you think the story should of went instead of the road it is currently on?

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