Zoe, you can’t just spring these things on people. How was Damien supposed to feel after he got tossed for not having ID then invited to back in for a roast spit with a thermometer.
In Zoe’s mind she has concluded, it feels good for me and for them so of course everyone will be on board to do it. She also doesn’t really take in the fact that 2 days ago he accidentally hurt her during sex, then instead of sex with him yesterday she had sex with her grampa 2 times in front of him… Now even more guys into the equation…
Making a comic is all about balance. As it is I have gone 2 months without a sex scene (outside of a little bit of a look at Abi) in a sex comic.
I am trying to put in subtext to get things across but I am not a fan of exposition dumps so I try to mostly tell this stuff visually and from the context of what is going on.
Seriously? I made you watch me screw my grandfather instead of you, but now I’ve got a better offer. I’ll share 1/3 of me while 2 strangers use my other parts (but you get to pick which orifice you use). What guy with any self-respect would accept an offer like that?
Of course, on the other hand he can’t complain too much about what happened with Zoe’s family since Mom is far more experienced than Zoe and gave him quite a ride for the money…
I hope Zoe remembers she is only wearing a butt plug under that jacket as she is walking around. I can see her saying “When did it get so chilly out here?”
Well story wise it is July, so probably is pretty hot even without clothes. I’d assume sitting down with forgetting it is in there would be quite uncomfortable though.
Sorry you don’t like where the story is going. I think many will enjoy what is coming in the next few months. There is shippon if you need a break from Zoe for a bit.
I don’t think it is as dangerous as when she goes to the old guy by herself and he ties her up. I mean at least here, she has Damien with her and the guys know who her mother is (and seem to hold Abby with a bit of respect).
The Abi thing being the most important. Something I’ve always tried to slip in there is Zoe wants to be like her mom, even cutting her hair in a similar fashion after the Caleb stuff. Her mom did it, so Zoe wants to too and to even outdo her mom by actually doing the guys. She loves her mom but she subconsciously has always been in competition with her a bit because she wants the men Abi has (having both had a crush on her dad and her uncle growing up).
Zoe, you can’t just spring these things on people. How was Damien supposed to feel after he got tossed for not having ID then invited to back in for a roast spit with a thermometer.
In Zoe’s mind she has concluded, it feels good for me and for them so of course everyone will be on board to do it. She also doesn’t really take in the fact that 2 days ago he accidentally hurt her during sex, then instead of sex with him yesterday she had sex with her grampa 2 times in front of him… Now even more guys into the equation…
Man, it would be great if you actually had these conversations in character in the comic
Making a comic is all about balance. As it is I have gone 2 months without a sex scene (outside of a little bit of a look at Abi) in a sex comic.
I am trying to put in subtext to get things across but I am not a fan of exposition dumps so I try to mostly tell this stuff visually and from the context of what is going on.
The term of art is “airtight”, as in all holes plugged.
Cluelessness, thou name art Zoe…
Seriously? I made you watch me screw my grandfather instead of you, but now I’ve got a better offer. I’ll share 1/3 of me while 2 strangers use my other parts (but you get to pick which orifice you use). What guy with any self-respect would accept an offer like that?
Someone who really wants in her butt, sadly that ain’t Damien.
Of course, on the other hand he can’t complain too much about what happened with Zoe’s family since Mom is far more experienced than Zoe and gave him quite a ride for the money…
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I hope Zoe remembers she is only wearing a butt plug under that jacket as she is walking around. I can see her saying “When did it get so chilly out here?”
Well story wise it is July, so probably is pretty hot even without clothes. I’d assume sitting down with forgetting it is in there would be quite uncomfortable though.
Anyone else feeling a bit like puking at this point?
How long until the snuff scene where she begs for it right to the end?
Sorry you don’t like where the story is going. I think many will enjoy what is coming in the next few months. There is shippon if you need a break from Zoe for a bit.
I don’t think it is as dangerous as when she goes to the old guy by herself and he ties her up. I mean at least here, she has Damien with her and the guys know who her mother is (and seem to hold Abby with a bit of respect).
The Abi thing being the most important. Something I’ve always tried to slip in there is Zoe wants to be like her mom, even cutting her hair in a similar fashion after the Caleb stuff. Her mom did it, so Zoe wants to too and to even outdo her mom by actually doing the guys. She loves her mom but she subconsciously has always been in competition with her a bit because she wants the men Abi has (having both had a crush on her dad and her uncle growing up).
Why do I want to try this in real life?! Now I just need to find a Zoe and 2 friends willing to fill her bottom holes! Yes I want the mouth! 😀
lol good luck with that 😀